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Vague Words Leave Customers in a Quandary

By Dianna Booher

And these vague terms in our own industry:

“Total quality management.”

“Rightsizing.”

“Empowerment.”

“Self-paced instruction.”

“Multimedia.”

Would anyone argue these have very different meanings from company to company, from manager to manager, from trainer to trainer?

We use vague, abstract terms when specific, concrete words would do nicely, thank you. We give instructions customers can’t follow. We present theoretical concepts that training participants can’t understand well enough to use. We pitch good products that prospective customers fear, and we push poor products that people pay for.

The account rep says, “We’ll have that paperwork to you in a few days” Is that two days or ten days? The job manual says, “You’ll need to set these thermostats much higher when the machines are idle” Is that ten degrees or twenty degrees difference?

Not keeping promises—a common complaint customers have against the people they do business with. Correction: About the people they stop doing business with. In the majority of situations, you can trace the difficulty to a vague statement an account executive made that was interpreted quite differently by the customer. The result? The customer concludes that the company intentionally or carelessly screwed up. Can you afford vague words and phrases in your proposals and courses?